I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Ms Aireen and Whaea Petra.
Hey MeleWhat I liked about your story was the pretty colourful picture's.I like the way you wrote about what the flowers had to do to be the best flower in the garden.Well done on your story.
Hey Mele I like all the bright colors and all theflowers.Well done keep the good job up.
Hey Mele I liked your story it was fun and interesting because you put in a lot of figurative language in it.Well done!
Hey Mele
ReplyDeleteWhat I liked about your story was the pretty colourful picture's.
I like the way you wrote about what the flowers had to do to be the best flower in the garden.
Well done on your story.
Hey Mele I like all the bright colors and all the
ReplyDeleteflowers.Well done keep the good job up.
Hey Mele I liked your story it was fun and interesting because you put in a lot of figurative language in it.Well done!
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