Magic!
The wind and rain
have swept the black sand clean.
A new part of a sand will appear
Magic!
as if they had no fear of anything.
All they care about is themselves.
People can never imagine,
just how angry the sea can be.
But,
when you go out on a ship...
Crash!
Boats disappear,
Magic!
hi mele
ReplyDeleteI like it how you put your good effort in doing your magic poem and made sure you made sense.and i also liked how you
use your capital letters and your punctuation . good job keep it up.
Greetings Mele
ReplyDeleteThis is very descriptive very powerful with your words also I can picture you writing it .This was made interesting to me and others.I've learnt from this that even magic can be in anywhere.
Mele great effort in your work.
From Tiere and Patosina